I'll wait for you ..even if you hate me

Can’t wait to see you my love

My tears are falling from year isn’t that enough ?

I want you to be beside and hold my times

Even if you killed me from hating I won’t mind

Cause I can pay this soul

For on second between your eyes ….

 

Can’t wait to see you my love

And smile innocently for this day of smiles

I loved you as I always will

But waiting for you

Is something I got used to

Since I was ten …

 

I know that I’m adoring you

But now

Moving away is the solution

I can go with a sea of tears

And I can cry forever

But I don’t want you back to me …

 

Boy go away

And I’m waiting for the day

When you can feel my love

Moving throw your blood

And your soul calling mine sadly

I would come back

And hug you forever my boy

Just keep a faith in your heart

I love you and I will always wait to get you… 

Author's Note

Hope you like this ....

Reviews

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Such an emotional read, very well done.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Like? Ha, I loved this! =D It's really good. It's so full of passion.. and you capture the yearn well. Love is so hard when it's this type of love.. somehow I can relate to this poem.. I love the last stanza.

[Tai Ryens]

Another great write! The second stanza seemed to strike me the most, you say that you have been used to this since you were ten, and that just proves that you held on for such a long time. Lovely poem, again, great job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Another great write....passionate and intense and captures deep long lasting love very nicely indeed...the conflicts etc....top work :)