3W 1H

Why don’t you believe

In true love and real hate ??

 

How you cannot admit

That my life is yours too ?

 

When is the last day

We shared that real kiss under the tree ?

 

What is the last thing

You want me to say

Before I walk away ?

 

Is it goodbye ???

Author's Note

Give me a real title to this piece ..
it is not even fair but ...i just wrote that ...

Reviews

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

I would have made the "h" more dramatic, and towards the end, since it's the only one in the piece.

But you have a nice flow, and the structure is good :)

[Dove]

So very straightforward and I like that. Great poem.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

So straightforward and nice...
sorry... i cant think of a better title
but your title seems just right

[khalid]

i think the suitable title can be..(it no longer matters)

[Sweets]

3W 1H...is like 3 weeks 1 hour?
but..as for a title..I think "Is it goodbye?" is the best title...because the last line summarizes it all =)
Great write sis! x)

[Jeremy Baker]

I think the last line would make a decent title. Nice poem, you create a sense of philosophical doubting with your use of rhetoric.

[Andrea Vargas]

I like the the very set down tone. You are asking questions which can lead to an uncomfortableness, due to the way your phrasing it, well done. I love the title, it reflects the poem, Its hard to understand and an uneasy feeling, that the questions provide, Keep it just as it is! Its perfect

[Tai Ryens]

Powerful poem that dripped emotion, the title makes me wonder why you named it that, could it be 3 weeks 1 hour? Just guessing, haha. Well, I don't usually find short work like this too good, but this is great, it's like I could envision a whole story going on behind my head as I read this aloud. Great job!

[EMF]

A powerful and strong poem, dripping with emotion and presence. A terrific read. Great work... yet again

[Thea]

Stunning...Quiet emotional...
Great poem... :)))