Devil’s Door

Devil’s Door

Counting my days by my hands

With tears falling hardly

like rain in a winter day

Trying to forget your touch

And your hands

That were moving on her lips

And ignoring your voice

That was calling her ...

 

I was dying over here

My heart melt

Like river between the hands of mountains

And my soul was yearning

Like a desert

that is running out of sand ...

 

All of that

You with her

Alone all night

I was looking at you

Like  I was a star

Landing on the high sky

And you were that "everyone"....

 

That hole in the devils door

What made me see

The killing truth

That i was ignoring

And trying to cover my eyes

Over it ...

 

I'm sure you love her

She does too

But :"I ADORE YOU"

This is why

I will let you go with her

Just to see your smile

And feel your laughs

 

Boy.. Take Care !!!

 

Before you go

Take my heart

And draw a smile on your tomb

Author's Note

Hoe you like it
and thanks for all of your reviews :D

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

That last line is phenomenal, really liked it!

[Enigma]

That intrigued me. I loved the concept of looking through the key hole of the Devil's door and seeing the crushing reality of betrayal. The pain is evident and yet, there is no trace of a probable revenge for the same. Somehow, it carries forward the cycle of getting hurt by someone you love and acknowledging that all you can do in return is simply "let him go with her".

Nice poem. :)

[khalid]

very nice one, go ahead

[Sweets]

"That hole in the devils door
What made me see
The killing truth
That i was ignoring
And trying to cover my eyes
Over it ..."
Such a wonderful stanza =)
You're getting wayyyyyyy better sis =3
keep goinggggggggggggg !!!

[Andrea Vargas]

I enjoyed it, and i'm just a little curious...whats the story behind this poem?

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Beautiful..!!!

[Black]

a caputering poem
beautifull

[Dove]

I love the emotion that was put into this poem. Very nice.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Being happy for your beloved no matter what is a nice thing to do.
=)

[Thea]

Aw...So emotional...I like this...Great poem... :)))