Happy Birthday Inershadow

So happy for you

Several years are gone

You have done them so well !

I think your life

Would be full of happiness

With your kids around

Your grand ones too …

And your wife

That is surely shining your life

With his words

Especially :”I love you”

Which we can’t get bored of ..

 

Your kids !

Who bought you that surprising cake

And smile toward you with there words
“ Happy Birthday “

 

Your friends here too

Your second family too

We are happy for you

Happy for those dreams

That were inside ripped

To get out and see you

Writing your thoughts

Expressing your feelings

Showing your talents ..

 

We are so happy

To see you here

And we will all say it

In one loud voice

While holding lighting candles

‘’Happy Birthday Inershadow”

 

We wish you a long life

Full of happiness and smiles

And for your kids to always be beside you …

Author's Note

Happy Birthday Inershadow :D

Reviews

[Andrea Vargas]

Nicely written.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely..!!!

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What a lovely gift for someone on their birthday. The sentiment is truly touching.

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What a lovely gift for someone on their birthday. The sentiment is truly touching.

[Dove]

This sounds like the perfect gift for an inner shadow. This is a nice poem.

[Tai Ryens]

Sweet poem, this makes an awesome gift for Inershadow. One of your poems dedicated to him, haha. I loved how you ended it, even though you say it multiple times before, something about that last line stands out.
"Your second family too" Second family? What's that? His writers cafe family? Haha, or a literal second family? Anyways, its probably none of my business. Great write!

[SOUL LESS]

lol..When I started reading this, I thought you were addressing your inner self- a kind of monologue. But my illusion was shattered by the comments. Very nice birthday present, but I think you could edit it slightly to give it literary merit- communicate with your inner self :)

[Lively]

Nice and touching. Inershadow, i think is the only one that never leave us even in worst situation.

[Thea]

Nice poem...Sweet... :)))

[EMF]

A wonderful present Stars. Great job, thank you for saying it for all of us.