I think I lost it

I think I lost  it

 

I think now

I’m being over

Day by day

Life is leaving me

Under the leaves of Autumn

And walking over my soul

Like I’m done

From  a long time

I think I lost it now

I lost the chance

To see my smiles

And run over the meadows

With a laugh that form

A non-ending song

Life killed me

But my soul is still alive

Can anyone heal me back ??? 

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Dove]

Lovely imagery! Fantastic poem! enjoyed reading it:D

[Taffy]

I Love It Again Your Writing is so Original Its Your Own You Make it your own and every time i read your writing i cry tears of joy and i feel the emotional concetion between you and the writing every word had its own meaning i didnt like it i really didnt i really super duper loved it

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

i dont like it.... i really dont... I...... L..O..V..E.. IT!! every word was meant for me... it has so much emotion in it and the ending on a question makes it so open to the reader,, i love it!!

[Sleeping Maiden]

OMGOSH... i absolutely love this! It's just fantastic. I love the rhyme and flow. It's really good. And I'm sure you'll find someone to heal you back again. =) Life has many journeys.. it can break us ..kill us.. but the strength of someone pulling you back to life will bring you to yourself once again. =)
Great write! And thank you for sharing.

[Sweets]

I can heal you back nooboid =3
I'm an awesome healer (H)
but yea, great poem!
and i loved the imagery!
and yeah...wonderful work :)

[Akshat♥]

I can heal you back anytime...just tell me when to do it:)
poem has feelings of sadness:(
I can easily relate to it..
you didn't lost it..its just you think like that only
enjoy life..every bit of it:)
Keep writing!!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I'm sure you'll find someone to heal you back with love...keep searching for that special one :)

Love the poetic rythm of the poem....stunning :)