I think I lost it

I think I lost  it

 

I think now

I’m being over

Day by day

Life is leaving me

Under the leaves of Autumn

And walking over my soul

Like I’m done

From  a long time

I think I lost it now

I lost the chance

To see my smiles

And run over the meadows

With a laugh that form

A non-ending song

Life killed me

But my soul is still alive

Can anyone heal me back ??? 

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Kiri Nells]

Well done!
Sorry it took so long to get to this RR, I had a lot of them.
But anyway, this is a nice poem. I like it. :)

[khalid]

very nice, although you are still young, you have so much experiences, you are the one who can heal yourself back

[donny ingraham]

execellent write, I'll ask some of my friend to review it and get their feelings upon it as well

[Andrea Vargas]

this sends out a message of the tortures of life and how they shot you down, I think you really used a great analogy when referring to 'A non-ending song' Then theres that little hope at the end where you ask if anyone can heal you.. great job. Keep writing

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good write..!!!

[Inyourshadow]

Here's some glue in the form of words to help piece back together yourself after this painful incident.

Chin up move forward
yesterday is dead
Now just forget him
and the pain you have bled
For tomorrow is brighter
and your friends have your back
with a candle to lead you
safe out of the black
So relax and breath easy
enjoy the fresh air
Take a step now another
and soon you'll get there
To a place where your friends wait
on a sunny kissed isle
To share with you laughter
and bring back your smile.

Keep em' coming and I will begin work in bday poem today for 11/11

[paradise]

I do Like it alot! Well done

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Short, sweet, and to the point.

Nice write.

[Casper]

Well I enjoyed it :)
I like the imagery that was in this poem. Nicely written :)