You name.. forever with me …

You name..  forever with me …

 

Would you shade my tears if I asked you

And hold my frowns to the infinity ?

Would you try to taste that kiss

That is colored by my pink lipstick ?

Would you feel my hands

That were waiting for you since they were born ?

Would you make me cry

When you leave this town and leave me alone ?

Would you take care of my heart?

Which is the biggest favor I want from you

And please baby

When I die squeeze my heart

And by my blood

Write your name on my grave

So that all my diaries would hold it …

 

I love you 

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

This runs deep, its as if I could feel the emotions going along with the flow. The first two lines were the most heartfelt, in my opinion. The wording was amazing, and it was a perfect way to start off the poem.

[Taffy]

frist 5 words
Loved it
Passionate
Emotional
Romantic
Love
Im Crying Now i'm so pleased with how the passion in you writing i love it everyday and every night i read it i'm so pleased of how well you keep writing the stories

[Sleeping Maiden]

oh wow.. very passionate this is! Love it!! It's filled with so much emotions.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very intensly passionate and romantic...awesome poem that I love...
e.g.
"Would you try to taste that kiss
That is colored by my pink lipstick ?"

[Sweets]

ouch...I loved your wide imagination!
soo awesome and soo touching :)

[Akshat♥]

So full of emotions...I love it:)
use of colors is also give a nice touch to it...
if someday that person you love will read this..
will definitely do whatever you want from him:)
Good writing!!