You name.. forever with me …

You name..  forever with me …

 

Would you shade my tears if I asked you

And hold my frowns to the infinity ?

Would you try to taste that kiss

That is colored by my pink lipstick ?

Would you feel my hands

That were waiting for you since they were born ?

Would you make me cry

When you leave this town and leave me alone ?

Would you take care of my heart?

Which is the biggest favor I want from you

And please baby

When I die squeeze my heart

And by my blood

Write your name on my grave

So that all my diaries would hold it …

 

I love you 

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Kiri Nells]

Great work!

[khalid]

nice poem although it is very optimistic! remember, life is good!

[Andrea Vargas]

It starts off sweet then it moves into an intense amount of power, When you say 'When i die sqeeze my heart,
and by my blood,
write your name on my grave,
so that all my diaries would hold it.'

This was an enduring write. Fantastic job (:

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!!

[paradise]

Hmm it was good i liked it the colors through me off a bit tho

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I like the way you played around with the colors.

Passionate poem too, by the way.

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This is amazing, loved the opening of this. So nicely done.

[Thea]

Aw, that's what you really call true love...Very sweet and emotional...You write with great emotions, wonderful work! :)))

[Dove]

So passionate, So emotional, So romantic, and So beautiful. I am impressed, not beacause I didnt think you could write but Im impressed because I've never read a poem like this. Great job!