The Hidden Star

You Said you can count the stars

But I'm saying you can't

Many also agrees ..

But you will always have a missing one

Which is the hidden me ...

Author's Note

I know it might be sowing a lot of self confidence but truly expressed it cause i never feel self confidence a lot :) ...

SO what do you think??

Reviews

[Sara]

I love this! It's so simple and bursting with emotion! I always did enjoy poems involving the stars and love!

[paradise]

awwhe its so good and simple and really interesting I like :P

[Inyourshadow]

Nothing wrong with a little self confidence S, seems a shame that a boy could fail to see the brightest star and wasted the chance to wish upon it for love. Beautifully expressed my friend, keep em' coming

[Senseless whatever]

Nice work. 'The hidden me' nice punch at the end. I would say this is not lack of confidence but the opposite. Knowing who you are and stating to the one that they have no clue. very nice.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice, short message portrayed!

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Lovely and simple! Beautiful!!

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Simple and wonderful

[khalid]

i dont know if it is short so it is nice or it is nice so it is short! anyways, i like it

[Thea]

Simply meaningful...Short but really understandable...Great piece... :)))

[Andrea Vargas]

lovely and simple, good job