The Hidden Star

The Hidden Star

A Poem by stars are far

You Said you can count the stars


But I'm saying you can't


Many also agrees ..


But you will always have a missing one


Which is the hidden me ...

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
I know it might be sowing a lot of self confidence but truly expressed it cause i never feel self confidence a lot :) ...

SO what do you think??

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I love this! It's so simple and bursting with emotion! I always did enjoy poems involving the stars and love!

Posted 13 Years Ago


awwhe its so good and simple and really interesting I like :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nothing wrong with a little self confidence S, seems a shame that a boy could fail to see the brightest star and wasted the chance to wish upon it for love. Beautifully expressed my friend, keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice work. 'The hidden me' nice punch at the end. I would say this is not lack of confidence but the opposite. Knowing who you are and stating to the one that they have no clue. very nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice, short message portrayed!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely and simple! Beautiful!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Simple and wonderful

Posted 13 Years Ago


i dont know if it is short so it is nice or it is nice so it is short! anyways, i like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


Simply meaningful...Short but really understandable...Great piece... :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


lovely and simple, good job

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 24, 2011
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Tyre, Lebanon



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