Your Birthday...

Your Birthday...

A Poem by stars are far

It is your birthday

My heart is breaking

But your's is thrilled..

I wish for you that long life

Full of happiness

And away from my eyes ..

I wish for your smile

To always be showing

And your tears never flowing ...

I wish to see you there

Satnding with her

Next year boy man ..

For Everyday no

But for today

Just wanna say

Happy Birthay my love..

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
It is for my Ex..
Today 20-10-2011,is his birthday so ..
I'm writting this for him just to show how much i still love him.
i know it is not nice
but hope you like it ....

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Kind of sad, actually. It is nice, but saddening.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is such a wonderful sweet write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is nice. :) Having the guts to still show him that you love him. Its sad and nice at the same time. :) Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


It seems sad yet happy. I love the colors here. Nice poem. =)
I hope you'll be okay. ^^
I know getting over someone you love can give a bit of time to get used to.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sweet and cute poem...and he has a nice birthdate too....Libra people rulez :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so so sweet :)
I loved how you changed the colors!!
Awesome work :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 20, 2011
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