Your Birthday...

It is your birthday

My heart is breaking

But your's is thrilled..

I wish for you that long life

Full of happiness

And away from my eyes ..

I wish for your smile

To always be showing

And your tears never flowing ...

I wish to see you there

Satnding with her

Next year boy man ..

For Everyday no

But for today

Just wanna say

Happy Birthay my love..

Author's Note

It is for my Ex..
Today 20-10-2011,is his birthday so ..
I'm writting this for him just to show how much i still love him.
i know it is not nice
but hope you like it ....

Reviews

[Sleepless]

I like the touch of crossing the lines because it makes the feelings feel more real. It is sad and happy at the end. Great writing.

[Jeremy Baker]

Bittersweet indeed and from the heart!

[Andrea Vargas]

I love it... but in line 11 you misspelled standing.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Aww...that is very sweet and sad!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Good birthday poem.

[Inyourshadow]

Awww this is bittersweet the love is evident and so sad when unrequited, you give of yourself in a forgiving and romantic manner, he is lucky to have known such emotion and stupid to have let it go. Now for another tantrum mawaaaanaaawwwaaa no fair two people with bday poems but not me lol. Keep em' coming

[FallenHeroXx]

Great read.

[Dove]

Kind of sad but still a great poem. Nice job!

[Scytheriax]

It's a bit sad, I have to admit.
It's sweet. I liked the formatting of the poem, to be perfectly honest. It really shows that it was typed as though it was written.