Won't you regret it ???

Won’t you regret it ???

 

You left the moon ,venues and Mars

Just because I'm there

You went from heaven to hell

Just because i wanted to say "..."

 

I hold my breath

To give them for you

But you lived breathless

Just because they are from me ..

 

you left the sea and river

And went to a desert

Just because I was looking ...

 

I will just go and live there

In the place where no people can be found

In a place where the tears are the life

I will just live there

Between the animals of the forest ....

 

But when i die

Because of you i will leave ..

 

will you regret it

because in that day

you would have lost

Everything in your life

The moon the breath the sees

And won't you regret

that fact that you lost

    ME

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

and wish he regret it :(
but sure he won't ...

Reviews

[Sleepless]

stop thinking about him he really is not worth it and he did lose you he will regret so i was watching this rogram and the girl gets hartbroken but at the end he realizes that he lost something valuable they still have gootten back but he is thinking about it your poem is lovely and bittersweet if he i for you then he will say im sorry but if he is not then someone special is waiting for you :P

[Andrea Vargas]

Poetically i feel that this is your best peom ever!!! I absolutely love thi! it is filled with such strong emotion, there is a glimmer og pain and anguish and i love it! very excellent work!

[SOUL LESS]

Just one thing...why do want to die so ardently? And two) why do want to make him regret it...he doesn't seem to have ditched you...yet? lol

[Freeminded]

And won't you regret
that fact that you lost
ME
Wow- this is seriously amazing!! I love every word of it!! Feeling, emotion, crys of pain scream out of this wonderful piece of literature!! Keep it up!!

[Inyourshadow]

This is so heartbreaking the plea of an open heart ignored, he is foolish to so quickly dismiss love for it is not easily found so freely given. Beautiful poem my friend and more fool him for never knowing what he had and what he will never share. Keep em' comng

typo seas not sees last stanza

[Passionate*]

I love this poem.

I hold my breath
To give them for you
But you lived breathless
Just because they are from me ..

Wow, girl!

[Enigma]

Wow. That was one amazing poem. It is so simple and yet, the picture of how you complete him is so vivid. His ignorance and aversion is always there and we all wonder when all is said and done, will he regret his actions at all?
Well done.

[Thea]

Aw, there's always that "regret" factor at our wrong decisions...The poem sounds poignant to me...Anyway, nice writing...

[Sweets]

I think he will regret it :)
I loved the second stanza!
This is a great poem sis ! :)

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

I love it so much!! Simple writing with strong feelings...