You are the main reason

i thought you were the kind of guy

that when i say i love you

you would say :"me too"

but i was 100% mistaken

you are just a kind of guy

that when he sees your tear

he just laugh and say

"it's not my mistake

i just saw you crying "

but you never knew

that you were the reason of my illness

you were the reason of my sickness

you were the one

that i cry just to ..

 

Im sorry boy

but you are the main reason

of my pain

i just want you to know

that im sorry 

Author's Note

I just wrote this ..
when you heart got broken you feel nothing except aching ..

I dedicate this :
for my soul that i always adored and i will always do, i will just wanna say whatever happened you will always stay my first real love ...I'm sorry ..(if he read that)

Hope you like it ...

Reviews

[Scytheriax]

I loved this poem. The diction is simplistic yet effective. The tone and emotion of the poem are clearly felt and carry throughout the entire piece.
These lines in particular spoke to me:
"You are just a kind of guy
that when he sees your tear
he just laugh and say
"it's not my mistake
i just saw you crying ""
Reminds me of an ex boyfriend I used to have, to be honest.
"Im sorry boy
but you are the main reason
of my pain
i just want you to know
that im sorry"
If anything, it sounds like he should be the one apologizing, but unfortunately that rarely happens or else the one who is being hurt apologizes instead...
I absolutely loved this poem.

[paradise]

I like it very full of emotion a broken heart really gets to most especially myself but its a great way to express and write

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Im sorry boy
but you are the main reason
of my pain
i just want you to know
that im sorry "

Very sad, but that stanza is my favorite and ties up everything well.
I hope you feel better soon.

[Casper]

Heart break... One of the worst feelings in the world. He seems kind of like, and I'm not trying to be disrespectful, but he seems kind of like an a*s.
You captured my imagination with your poem. It's sad, but good.

[Inyourshadow]

you were the reason for my illness, you were the reason for my sickness ~ Too true the taunt of false love leaves it's stain and it's taint upon us making us unwell doubting ourselves or even why we bother. Beautiful use of painful emotion for is this not the trait of a true poet to pen their pain. Applauding the honesty now keep em' coming

[Sakib]

Lot of emotions and feelings of pain here. I can understand it totally. Nice work , Suhad. :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very moving poem...really tells the emotional impact and the things one experiences in love, excellent :)