You are the main reason

i thought you were the kind of guy

that when i say i love you

you would say :"me too"

but i was 100% mistaken

you are just a kind of guy

that when he sees your tear

he just laugh and say

"it's not my mistake

i just saw you crying "

but you never knew

that you were the reason of my illness

you were the reason of my sickness

you were the one

that i cry just to ..

 

Im sorry boy

but you are the main reason

of my pain

i just want you to know

that im sorry 

Author's Note

I just wrote this ..
when you heart got broken you feel nothing except aching ..

I dedicate this :
for my soul that i always adored and i will always do, i will just wanna say whatever happened you will always stay my first real love ...I'm sorry ..(if he read that)

Hope you like it ...

Reviews

[Scytheriax]

I loved this poem. The diction is simplistic yet effective. The tone and emotion of the poem are clearly felt and carry throughout the entire piece.
These lines in particular spoke to me:
"You are just a kind of guy
that when he sees your tear
he just laugh and say
"it's not my mistake
i just saw you crying ""
Reminds me of an ex boyfriend I used to have, to be honest.
"Im sorry boy
but you are the main reason
of my pain
i just want you to know
that im sorry"
If anything, it sounds like he should be the one apologizing, but unfortunately that rarely happens or else the one who is being hurt apologizes instead...
I absolutely loved this poem.

[Sleepless]

once agin i never knw who was soul but well its ok youll find someone :P

[Andrea Vargas]

This was a little confusing at first but after a couple of reads i understood the mistreat of the heart... It was nicely written

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

I don't understand how this is a poem.
Lack of structure left me struggling to follow along.
Not sure what your thought process was, but it seemed pretty scattered.
You had a great idea, you just didn't project very well.
Keep in mind that poetry isn't just your thoughts randomly jotted down. Work on it, scrap away at it, add to it.
Erase it and try again

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Aww very full of sad emotions. It hurts we your heart aches! Beautifully written my dear!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good..!!!

[Thea]

Aw, such a hurtful feeling... :'(
That was totally sad...

[Sleeping Maiden]

wah, it moves me. I loved it. The feelings are well felt in this piece. So sad..
It's true. I hate feeling broken hearts.. i can relate.. and it sucks so much.
I liked this poem. It's very straight forward, simple, and yet has a big impact! =) Nicely done!

[Jeremy Baker]

I do ... it's a lovely poem and sentiment

[Dove]

Very nice. Keep it up

[GlamGirl]

Never had my heart broken, hope I never do.
Terrific poem!!!