Beyond our friendship

We sat together

Giving secrets

We keep them

Between the leaves of the trees

And our smiles

Fill the lands …

 

We talked till night came

The sun was gone

And the truth came on

You said a word

That I would never forget

You told me the real truth

That you were hiding from a long time

You told me that thing

That was keeping you breathless …

You said that:

“We are friends

Great ones too

But the problem is

I’m giving my soul for you

Beyond our friendship

You can see

My heart that is living

Just to see you …”

 

Last words I’ve heard

Before I fell down and say :

“I love you

And I want you too “

But please

Let the truth be our title

And our love be the whole life “

 

This is what was hidden

Beyond our friendship …

29/9/2011

21:21 

Author's Note

Hope you like this .. :)

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

this was deep and sweet work, what a nice combination. i really like this poem you've written here. the poem flows well and the feelings here are strong!
"Last words I’ve heard
Before I fell down and say :
“I love you
And I want you too “
But please
Let the truth be our title
And our love be the whole life “

This is what was hidden
Beyond our friendship …"
now i just love those words, i like how everything just climaxes there. great job!

[paradise]

Wow this is a great poem I love it so much it's a story ina poem something I could never do. Unique and brilliant

[ivizarx]

That I do, I do indeed take liking to this ^_^ thanx yous for sharing heartfelt poems from a sweet and innocent heart that it seems to be coming from. It's a dear wonder and enjoyment that most within the world can find a comfort within.
Romantic poetry seems to be quite an obessive tone/theme for you. Nothing wrong with it, as there is a Shakespear in all of us I find ^_^ though, there could potentially be a Lewis Caroll, Lord Byron, Andrew Marvell, Homer, or even a John Milton too. my simple suggestion is curiosity and exploration never killed anybody :p except maybe "the cat" according to modern folklore..

[Desmund Tiny]

a heartfelt poem.... I can relate to this.....

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This is so cute!

The font is real pretty also.
:)

[Lily Mae]

This has a deeper soul felt feel to it. I really enjoyed it :) xx

[Sakib]

This is one of the finest poem of yours. Really evocative and heartfelt. My favorite. :)

[Dove]

Spectacular!! This is a heart warming poem and they flow was great. Beautiful beautiful job.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Another outsatnding poem so much love and warmth that is sheer brilliance :)

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Simply Outstanding! So wonderful, enjoyable to read!