Under love Canalization

I was living freely

In a world that was so dreamy

I knew you there…

You took me to a castle

That was so far away

From this world

The fountains were dancing

Trees were singing

And birds were waving me a “Hello”…

 

I was surprised

Gladly living there

You gave me everything

But you told me

“Don’t leave this castle

Because I want no one to see you just me “..

 

You were always here

Never left me alone

Even though I was sure that

I was living

“Under love colonization “

But believe me

I’m the happiest person in the world

Because I got you …

Author's Note

I hope you like this :D

Reviews

[Andrea Vargas]

this was beAUTIFUL !!

[Sleepless]

i love this this made me smile !:) wonderful writing :)

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Very lovely! What a beautiful story! :))

[Enigma]

An impressive take on the possesive aspect of love. Well done.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Good poem!

I like the font too.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Exceptional and love your phrase ' living under love colonisation' and then the fact you were happiest in the world and fantastic dream world..can I come :P

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So wonderful, Beautiful write!

[Sakib]

Nice imagination. Mostly based on fantasy but It's sometime better to think like this. At least it can make you smile. Nice poem. :)

[ivizarx]

seems like a good fascination of a romance being fantasized between two people from one's own perspective. it's pretty good, and like Smarie said, sweet.