Net love Kills

I will just say that 

Love is everything i think about 

I'm so madly in love with you

Dying to find you "online"....

I never thought 

that i would fall so hard 

Or feel that 

you would be the sun 

that im always moving around ...

I think that my computer 

is the best thing i own now

Because i can see you 

Behind it ..

I never wanted to love you

as a boyfriend 

I always wanted you to be 

my bro my bff...

I saw your picture once 

But now it is all what i dream about

Those brown eyes 

behind that glassy eye glasses...

That face that i would never ignore

That voice that I've never heared 

And I'm dying to ...

I always talk about you

With myself and between my friends

My diary is full if you sweet name

that are followed by those hearts <3 <3

I want t you all what i say 

But i need more than this 

I want to always follow you ..

I can feel you aren't in love with me 

But i think I'm okay 

As long as i have that chance

To be yours 

And see you once ..

I've told you that once 

But in an indirect way ...

I want to be 

the pen you write your poems with ...

I want to be more than my friend 

I want you to feel everything..

I never thought that 

I could love my laptop 

Just to be with you ...

you are so far away 

And my heart is so mealting over you..

I wisht that we could kill the distance 

And be together a couple forever 

I just want you to know 

"I love you "

I hope you also do 

Author's Note

hope you like it :)

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I too soooo love my laptop , and the internet as well. I can tell this is straight from the heart and very loving and sweet and I must say I can relate too, from both a personal and psychological point of view of feeling/understandin internet love, and well I hope and wish you all the best in your pursuit/outcome...some lucky fella he will be xD

[Inyourshadow]

Many have known the ache of cybernetic connections plugging into anothers heart beep while tap dancing together across the keyboard fumbling their words with mis sent emoticons. Beautiful poem and sentiment keep em' coming.

Has for the strike no slacking you are charged to study the works of Shakespeare, solve the age old pi theory and discover a new chemical all before tomorrow lmao only joking enjoy the day off ~Shadow

[Scytheriax]

I loved the first stanza the most.
This is definitely a wonderfully written poem. I loved the diction and you can really feel the emotion of the piece.

[Dove]

I also love my laptop!!! This is a really nice poem. Great job!!

[EMF]

Real nice Read. Sweet, funny and romantic. Really good work. I liked it a lot.

[Sweets]

This is awesome!!
I love my laptop sooooo much too!!!
xD awesome love poem!

[Sakib]

Wow!! So romantic!! Love is crazy. It makes us do crazy things. This kind of thing happens with lot of people. You expressed it nicely. I can feel it and relate to it. Nice captivating piece. Thanks for sharing. :)

[ivizarx]

I definitely do like it ^_^
seems a bit personal, but a situational theme I can relate to
thnx yous 4 the good read