Dear my bragger

Dear my bragger :

 

How can I begin ,is it ok if I said that I’m in love with you boy but I couldn’t enjoy a moment with you because you are always bragging by yourself ..trust me you are not the best even though you are great as you are ..but bragging makes everything  less to the eyes and also in the heart , when you love someone you should care about him, at least ask your girl if she is all right because when you have a girl trust me you will have everything and when you dream with her and not find her by your side you will feel so down and useless, when you have someone to love you and you also do, in this moment you would have got the  every beautiful thing in the world you will catch the clouds and the sun between your hands ..

When you have a girl, trust me you would be able to fly to the moon and no one will say why, because when you think about that you will be going to itch her picture you will be going to write for he the best 3 words that any girl would be THRILLED when she hear them :” I love you my dear “…

No one don’t know what is love, but some people ignore the real meaning and the just do whatever they want to do ..

They just think that love is too easy just like you do, love is more than a word it is acting and caring about the one you love, it is not just :”I love you “..this is just a beginning you will need more than this ..

Think about every word I said to you and then come back to me in this moment I will be all yours , even if you took  all my life to understand this I will just be waiting for you my love …And i want to tell you Don’t be a bragger because in this thing you kill yourself ..I love you

 

2/9/2011

Last feature in 4/9/2011

4;30 PM 

Author's Note

I wrote this from a long time you can see the date ..

Give me honest opinions :)
and thank for reading it :)

Reviews

[Andrea Vargas]

This has a great messgae your format is a little jumbled but all in all I really enjoyed reading it (:

[Sleepless]

yep dont like bragging people nice story !:)

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Wonderful message...This is a great write!

[Thea]

Full of honesty...The message is just amazing...Great piece of writing! :)))

[Senseless whatever]

I really like this. A sweet touching story/ letter. Understanding that to love from a distance is truly the hardest thing. Knowing yourself, seeing how the bragging cheapens the other, excellent.

[Dove]

I like how this story is very honest and the most important lesson in here is love is more than words.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A beautiful message that is so true....love is more than words...it is the full package with no conditions etc...such an amzing read :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Very honest piece...

I like it!

[Sakib]

i liked the message here. There are some typos but I know you'll fix those. Yes, Bragger is a word. Bragger and Braggart is the same meaning (based on previous review). Bragging is never expected from a person. Thanks for the story. I liked it. :)

[stars are far]

i know there is a lot of grammar mistakes because i aloways fail in grammar at school .. :/