I Don't want to see you

I have no words to describe my pain

When the one who is supposed to make you

Feel good make you fall apart ..

 

When the one who should shade your tears away

And make the title of your life is relaxation

Make it Troubles, Dark, Tears …

 

I’m supposed to spend with you my last year

But now I don’t want to have one day with you

I prefer to die rather than looking at you

I want to commit a suicide than listing to your voice …

 

You thought that you are saying supportive words

But when you said those words I want to throw is knife in your heart

And enjoy the look where your blood  color the room ..

 

You thought that you are great and I will learn from you

But all what I have learnt till now

How to be heartless and mean …

Author's Note

I wrote this now ..
because i was so hurted from my teachers...so i kinda feel like this toward this last school year ..i thought i would enjoy but i dont think so...

Reviews

[Sweets]

o.o sissssssssssss
Just ignore them doode...some teachers are just as worthless as a...umm...FOOTBALL GAME! :P
haha ._. anyways, you shouldn't listen to teachers...sometimes all they say are LIE LIES LIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS...they just want to show off...as if they're princesses (no offense, but not every teacher is like that)
yeah :) *huggiez*
and it's just this year, then you'll forget them and enjoy your life ^__^
you're smart and you know you are! so don't let anyone hurt you my nooboid sis

[Andrea Vargas]

things will get better, throw your self into your poetry and remember, your words are very powerful..keep writing you have a talent (:

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Some teachers as well some people in general in society are just plain mean and cruel...but public servants should have it naturally within them to be empathetic and compassionate, if they can't they shouldn't be in those positions. Sorry for your experiences and well it's easier said than done but you have to believe in yourself, cause all of us here certainly do :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good..!!!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, that's sad that your not having a good last year! =( This poem expresses your feelings well. Don't worry, you'll be done in no time and you won't ever have to deal with those mean teachers. I liked how deep the pain is in this piece.. it reflects on what you explained in your note. I'm so sorry you have to deal with that.. especially on your last year.. too. I wish you best of luck and good wishes! =)
And still, wonderful poem full of emotions. =D I love your work. ^o^

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But when you said those words I want to throw is knife in your heart

I think you mean this instead of is,
But I can feel ya on this one.
So many deep powerful feelings,
I love it. Thank you for your reviews.

[Sakib]

I'm feeling so sorry for you. We also experience this kind of situation. Yes, it hurts. But you shouldn't bother too much about it. You'll get reward from them if you do good things. This poem expressed your emotion nicely. Nice write. :)