I Don't want to see you

I have no words to describe my pain

When the one who is supposed to make you

Feel good make you fall apart ..

 

When the one who should shade your tears away

And make the title of your life is relaxation

Make it Troubles, Dark, Tears …

 

I’m supposed to spend with you my last year

But now I don’t want to have one day with you

I prefer to die rather than looking at you

I want to commit a suicide than listing to your voice …

 

You thought that you are saying supportive words

But when you said those words I want to throw is knife in your heart

And enjoy the look where your blood  color the room ..

 

You thought that you are great and I will learn from you

But all what I have learnt till now

How to be heartless and mean …

Author's Note

I wrote this now ..
because i was so hurted from my teachers...so i kinda feel like this toward this last school year ..i thought i would enjoy but i dont think so...

Reviews

[Sweets]

o.o sissssssssssss
Just ignore them doode...some teachers are just as worthless as a...umm...FOOTBALL GAME! :P
haha ._. anyways, you shouldn't listen to teachers...sometimes all they say are LIE LIES LIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS...they just want to show off...as if they're princesses (no offense, but not every teacher is like that)
yeah :) *huggiez*
and it's just this year, then you'll forget them and enjoy your life ^__^
you're smart and you know you are! so don't let anyone hurt you my nooboid sis

[Kiri Nells]

For a vent-y rant-y poem, this is really good. Awesome write!

[Jeremy Baker]

I hope that you encounter some teachers that will transform your life in some way, as I did when I was younger. Even so, your eventual success and enjoyment of life may come because of, or in spite of, the people you meet ... but the choice will always be yours. Thanks for sharing!

[Enigma]

Writing out your anger is probably the best way to get rid of it. I do it, not too often, but whenever I do, it works.

Like this poem. I can clearly sense the emotions of disappointment. But there's always the hope to carry on and move to the stop. Well penned. :)

[donny ingraham]

like this poem, thanks for sharing

[Lily Mae]

That's why we write.. to vent all we feel and have pent up inside..so well done..x

[Senseless whatever]

Good to vent and let it all out. Don't know the details of what's going on but keep your chin up. Stay strong and move forward. Whatever they say or try to do use it to learn, about them and about you. Go in each day and look at whatever positive thing you can. that will help make the days better. Don't waste your energy or talent on the negative, that only makes you weaker and them stronger. Stay positive, look for the good things. Trust me I know it is not easy,some days you may not find any, but when you try every day to find some they will start to show.

[Thea]

Oh yeah...I like this...It's my last year too and I feel that I'm not going to enjoy the rest of the year...Simply because, of course, some of our teachers are quite mean to us...And the worst part is some of my classmates are pissing the hell out of me because they are considered "cheaters" whenever we have an examination... *sighs* Let's just wish that there will be a time for us to enjoy this last year...

Love the whole poem...Can feel the emotions here...
Well done... :)))

[the in between]

I felt similar to this before, but wow so brutal. That caught my attention :) awesome poem. Theses sorts of stresses are worse than other types because we trust certain people to be there for us like teachers, parents, and friends and when they fail us and don't play the roles expected, things get confusing. Painful,

[Dove]

I feel like I can relate to this poem. The only difference is my teachers didnt hurt me my family did. The last few lines touched me the most because thats exactly how I felt. Another beautiful piece.

[Sleepless]

oh teahcers teachers ! teachers !:P dont worry i had a teacher like thth on seventh she was my chorus teacher oh i stil remenber her big owl eyes that stared at me i remenbered causes me nightmares never really let me sing she just didint like me but you knowwht? you are a great person you shouldnt let your days be ruined by teachers that to e mean we should call them old people or people you should always be happy life passes way too fast enjoy every bit even if every day is bittersweet :)