You are over

You are over

 

I was always saying

“ I love you, and I will never walk away “

But now

All I can remember about you

Is your smiles and laughs

When I was calling your name

From under the ground

And when my hand reaches the ground

All what you did

Is step on it

And make me fall again

You never tried to help me out …

 

Now im saying that I’m done

All what you’ve done is enough

I think you won this round

But I was the winner in the big game

The game of life

Where you meet people …

 

Haven’t you recognized that

From your last :”I hate you”

I never tried to get you back

Don’t you know why !!

 

I will tell you

Last time you stepped on my hand

I fell so hard

I looked around

And I found someone who cry for me

I found someone who care for me

I found him ..

He hugged me so tight

And made me forget

All what you’ve done to me ..

 

Even though we are living under the ground

But we are happy

We can face the truth

With a smile

And make each other feel right

In my world

This is what called “REAL LOVE “

Goodbye my hurter ..

 

1:58 PM

17/9/2011

Suhad

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sunni Davis]

This really spoke to me. As someone who's also been hurt by those who were supposed to love me, I understand the emotions involved in finally finding someone who helps you up when you are down and loves you for who you are. Your poem is inspiring and empowering.

[Sakib]

You should care for him who care for you. A powerful message to him who hurt you. It's great to know you've found your real love. Best of luck. Well written. I enjoyed it. :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The breakthrough message in this poem is so wondefully expressed and being held hostage by fake love is not nice...so yes "real love" im sure you have found that ...;) you did a perfect work :)