You are over

You are over

 

I was always saying

“ I love you, and I will never walk away “

But now

All I can remember about you

Is your smiles and laughs

When I was calling your name

From under the ground

And when my hand reaches the ground

All what you did

Is step on it

And make me fall again

You never tried to help me out …

 

Now im saying that I’m done

All what you’ve done is enough

I think you won this round

But I was the winner in the big game

The game of life

Where you meet people …

 

Haven’t you recognized that

From your last :”I hate you”

I never tried to get you back

Don’t you know why !!

 

I will tell you

Last time you stepped on my hand

I fell so hard

I looked around

And I found someone who cry for me

I found someone who care for me

I found him ..

He hugged me so tight

And made me forget

All what you’ve done to me ..

 

Even though we are living under the ground

But we are happy

We can face the truth

With a smile

And make each other feel right

In my world

This is what called “REAL LOVE “

Goodbye my hurter ..

 

1:58 PM

17/9/2011

Suhad

Author's Note

Enjoy this :D

hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Sunni Davis]

This really spoke to me. As someone who's also been hurt by those who were supposed to love me, I understand the emotions involved in finally finding someone who helps you up when you are down and loves you for who you are. Your poem is inspiring and empowering.

[Inyourshadow]

Love the ending and so glad you found a true love to erase the pain and tears, the imagery though dark speaks perfectly of those that only use the other and never truely care. Very nicely penned, keep em' coming

[Lily Mae]

Very nice.. :) I enjoyed this...x

[Dove]

I like the emotion that I felt while I was reading this. You did a great job!

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A-MAZING!!!!
I incerely enjoyed and loved this write.

[A Risen Heroine.]

Awesome piece og poetry!!!
I really, really like it!!!
I can relate SO easily!!

I LOVE IT!!!
Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[M.Babu]

This is pain and hope well articulated!!
I loved the transition between them btw....

"I found him ..
He hugged me so tight
And made me forget
All what you’ve done to me ."

Nicely done!

~M.Babu~

[Sleeping Maiden]

This is such a great poem! A very powerful message to the one who hurt you. I'm glad you found your real love though! Best of luck and wishes! =)

[~Blue Fantasy~]

great job...I liked this poem.

[Sweets]

this is greattttttt :D
best poem you've written so far!!!
im soo happy for you sis :)
great work!!!