I will come back ...

I will come back …

 

I will come back

One day

When you have no choice

Either me or no one ?

 

I will come back

When your heart will be beatless

And I will heal you back

 

I will come back

When your mind be thinkless

I will move your thoughts

And make you like now

 

I will come back

When I feel like you need me

Trust me

I will keep loving you ..

I will come back

In the right time ..

For now a goodbye

And please wait

For my last hello ..

 

4/9/2011

4:53 PM

Suhad

Author's Note

Hope you like this :)

Reviews

[M.Babu]

I really enjoyed the power in each of the words...the repetition of "I will come back" added to the meaning and the determination of the persona to "save" the concerned person and nurture them up back to health. Though i felt that the coming back might also have a significance to stir guilt to the concerned party that they made the wrong choice for not chosing the persona in the first place...

This was a really interesting piece from you...your words are growing right infront of me. And i feel really privileged to have witnessed that Suhad :D

To me, this is one of my favorite pieces from you. Keep this UP!!!

Wonderful piece, my friend.

~M.Babu~

[Sunni Davis]

Beautiful and so strong, so defiant. I love the power and certainty in this. Excellent write, as always, dear.

[Thea]

Wow...Very beautiful...Like it... :)))

[Dove]

passionate and very well expressed. nice job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wonderful passionate write capturing that sense of you being the one that will ultimately be the right one....your love will last and so that captures it. Marvellous :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

wow. This is really good. Very touching and has this love that will always stay even though there's been some kind of slight break.. the love stays.. until the right time comes back again. I really liked it. Nice job!

[Sakib]

This is like an endless love. Nicely expressed and I can feel the emotion. I liked it. Nice write. :)

[Sweets]

._. awesomeness D:
wellz, I hope you come back soon :3