I will come back ...

I will come back …

 

I will come back

One day

When you have no choice

Either me or no one ?

 

I will come back

When your heart will be beatless

And I will heal you back

 

I will come back

When your mind be thinkless

I will move your thoughts

And make you like now

 

I will come back

When I feel like you need me

Trust me

I will keep loving you ..

I will come back

In the right time ..

For now a goodbye

And please wait

For my last hello ..

 

4/9/2011

4:53 PM

Suhad

Author's Note

Hope you like this :)

Reviews

[M.Babu]

I really enjoyed the power in each of the words...the repetition of "I will come back" added to the meaning and the determination of the persona to "save" the concerned person and nurture them up back to health. Though i felt that the coming back might also have a significance to stir guilt to the concerned party that they made the wrong choice for not chosing the persona in the first place...

This was a really interesting piece from you...your words are growing right infront of me. And i feel really privileged to have witnessed that Suhad :D

To me, this is one of my favorite pieces from you. Keep this UP!!!

Wonderful piece, my friend.

~M.Babu~

[Senseless whatever]

Love the last line of this, 'and please wait for my last hello..' could go either way. Redemption or revenge.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wonderful..!!!

[Desmund Tiny]

I like this one..... great piece

[Andrea Vargas]

This was great (:

Very nice. Incredible sentiment and feeling.

[EMF]

Wonderful my friend. You write from your heart and your heart expresses it so well. You are such an accomplished author for one so young.

[Black]

a beautifull poem

[Enigma]

Once you start loving a person so passionately and deeply, you can't stop feeling so. A lovely poem. Well written.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

very nicely said...good write.