I can't say but silence ...

I wasn’t sure what I would say

For that  my answer was silence

It’s better than expressing

My feeling and my thoughts

Toward you my cute boy …

 

It’s hard to say a love word

Because you are far away in this world

I want you but I can’t say it

I’m still young to fall this hard

I don’t want to love you

But it is too late

I fell hard this time

Because I feel safe and warm..

 

For the first time

I feel like this

For the first time

Someone says to me

I love you

And I can feel that ..

 

It is so great to feel

That you are being loved 

Author's Note

I wrote this for someone...


hope you like this ;)

Reviews

[Desmund Tiny]

Nice poem I like it...... especially the last two lines..... so sweet...

[Light]

...clearly this was written for someone...lol. falling helplessly in love; leaving you with nothing but silence. words are sometimes too cheap to describe something so precious. very nice

-light-

[...]

So sweet and wonderful, i hope that someone loves this.

[Andrea Vargas]

I like it.. if i am correct you are referring to a brand new love, something strange and elusive to a young girl..i like the simple yet strong emotions!

[Thea]

For someone new?! :)))

"It is so great to feel
That you are being loved"
Simply beautiful... :)))

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very nice! This kind of love maybe one of the hardest to endure. Lovely write.

[Sweets]

._. Nice nice :3
Getting better every time x)
-hugs-

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I can totally get the feeling in that how hard it is to take that final step...and you managed to convey that so perfectly...beautiful as always :)

[Sakib]

"J" ?? By the way it's nice and sweet. So simple yet says a lot about you. You express your feelings through your poems nicely. I liked this too. :)