I can't say but silence ...

I can't say but silence ...

A Poem by stars are far

I wasn’t sure what I would say

For that  my answer was silence

It’s better than expressing

My feeling and my thoughts

Toward you my cute boy …

 

It’s hard to say a love word

Because you are far away in this world

I want you but I can’t say it

I’m still young to fall this hard

I don’t want to love you

But it is too late

I fell hard this time

Because I feel safe and warm..

 

For the first time

I feel like this

For the first time

Someone says to me

I love you

And I can feel that ..

 

It is so great to feel

That you are being loved 

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
I wrote this for someone...


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Very true. What a wonderful feeling it is to feel loved. Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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hmm
yes it does feel nice, wonderful write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice...it does feel so good to be loved! :))

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good one..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great expression,loved it!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can really relate to what you expressed here. Its exactly what I'm feeling at the moment but I'm having trouble expressing it. You've managed to do a tremendous job of it. Nicely written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice i still havent learned that lesson there is a qote that says
" the greatest thing you will ever learn is to love nd be loved back :)" beautiful poem !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


this just explained everything that has happened to me...nicely written

Posted 13 Years Ago


The last two poems are the best and the whole poem is beautiful. Very sweet, good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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