My bird

Living beside a river 

Every day I wake up

On the singing sound of the river

And the anthems for that little bird ..

 

It was the best morning

And the every nice moment

I had with this river and that bird ..

 

He was my best friend

And the river was my heart

I can’t have a day with them both ..

 

One day I woke up early

I went out to see that bird

It was a piece of blood and dead meat

And the river was crying bloody tears :’(

I couldn’t hold this

It was too hard on me ..

 

In that moment I felt

Like im just a non-used number

In this WORLD

NOOO NOO NO N O

This was my words

I couldn’t believe that my best friend died :’(

From that day me and the people

Are on a war

That will end by one of us

The other will follow that little sweet bird

The winner will have the world ..

 

But that came after I lost

Every beautiful thing in my life

And I had nothing more to lose :’(

WHO WOULD BE THE WINNER ????

 

3/9/2011

Author's Note

hope you like this ..

my insipiration was an arabic song ...
i loved it :)

Reviews

[...]

Wow, powerful piece here,
I liked this write, nicely done!

[Becky C Strukamp]

I felt this was a very sad poem. You penned it well.

[Sweets]

o.o which song is it??
and once again, great work sis :)
better and better each day :3

[Dove]

wow this poem is amazing i loved it!! Its very creative and thats always a good thing. Fantastic job

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very nice poem.deeper than on first impressions...makes some nice points here, Excellent :)

btw would love to hear the Arabic song..never heard any before...so would be nice :)

[Sakib]

An intriguing poem. I liked the thoughts here. Creative one. Great job. :)