My bird

Living beside a river 

Every day I wake up

On the singing sound of the river

And the anthems for that little bird ..

 

It was the best morning

And the every nice moment

I had with this river and that bird ..

 

He was my best friend

And the river was my heart

I can’t have a day with them both ..

 

One day I woke up early

I went out to see that bird

It was a piece of blood and dead meat

And the river was crying bloody tears :’(

I couldn’t hold this

It was too hard on me ..

 

In that moment I felt

Like im just a non-used number

In this WORLD

NOOO NOO NO N O

This was my words

I couldn’t believe that my best friend died :’(

From that day me and the people

Are on a war

That will end by one of us

The other will follow that little sweet bird

The winner will have the world ..

 

But that came after I lost

Every beautiful thing in my life

And I had nothing more to lose :’(

WHO WOULD BE THE WINNER ????

 

3/9/2011

Author's Note

hope you like this ..

my insipiration was an arabic song ...
i loved it :)

Reviews

[Andrea Vargas]

This has a nice format, Lovely pice (:

[Lively]

Touching........ In todays world man is man's biggest enemy.

[Miss'LC]

awh man as if the bird died:( sad times.
but nice pieaceee!:)xxx

[~Blue Fantasy~]

So sad, very interesting work.

[Dark Beauty]

Sad poem but very interseting, you captured the message with your wonderful words great job

[Sleepless]

sad but awesome a brillian poem !:)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!!

[EMF]

A beautiful song and a beutiful poem. Loved it

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww! So sad. Yet so deep. I love it. Nice job on the emotions here. It's unique! Simply wonderful. =D