Lovers dream

Looking towards the lush meadows

Two young lovers with their hungry eyes

Hug each other ever so tightly

And they never ever want to let go ….

 

On the shore they walk hand in hand

Their bodies sashaying in the golden sands

They feel this is what true love is all about

And as their hearts beat as one

They have no doubts…..

 

The scents of the cool spring breeze fill their senses

And as they feel that their dreams are getting closer

They sit between the trees whilst the goldfish are singing

Listening to them and holding their secrets

They let go and share a kiss that lingers on in perpetuity 

 

Then they look lovingly towards the hypnotic skies

And as they hold their hands out in prayer

Their dreams rain upon them from heaven

Made true by God’s everlasting love

 They can only observe and say “Amen”

ا�'مين

Author's Note

This was a collaboration between me and yas ( Soulcrusader) ..
hope you like this :)

Enjoy !!!

Reviews

[M.Babu]

"The scents of the cool spring breeze fill their senses
And as they feel that their dreams are getting closer
They sit between the trees whilst the goldfish are singing
Listening to them and holding their secrets
They let go and share a kiss that lingers on in perpetuity"

Such a sweet piece. And i think it was perfectly executed between the two of you...the tone and emotion are raw and so touching. GOOD JOB!

~M.Babu~

[Dove]

This is brilliant and beautiful! The two of you did a grat job on this piece.

[Sakib]

You two have done a great job. So beautiful and refreshing. Well done!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of hope and love. I like the place you took the reader with the good description and positive emotion of this poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sweets]

so romantic and sweet (:
but the "ا'مين" is kinda wrong o.o
the ا should have this "~" on top o_O
dunno how to write it on computer but yea D:
anyways =3 this is great! :D

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I love this...dunno why.... lolz

Great pleasure working with such a talented and amazing friend too :)

Thnaks for the opportunity xD

[Thea]

Nicely written...Like the idea...Great job... :)))

[Que]

I loved it. It has so much emotion in it, and being combined with the scenery, it all adds up to a very romantic situation. I think this is one of your best works. :)
Cheers and have a good day.

[EMF]

I loved it. Pair of you work so well together