Lovers dream

Looking towards the lush meadows

Two young lovers with their hungry eyes

Hug each other ever so tightly

And they never ever want to let go ….

 

On the shore they walk hand in hand

Their bodies sashaying in the golden sands

They feel this is what true love is all about

And as their hearts beat as one

They have no doubts…..

 

The scents of the cool spring breeze fill their senses

And as they feel that their dreams are getting closer

They sit between the trees whilst the goldfish are singing

Listening to them and holding their secrets

They let go and share a kiss that lingers on in perpetuity 

 

Then they look lovingly towards the hypnotic skies

And as they hold their hands out in prayer

Their dreams rain upon them from heaven

Made true by God’s everlasting love

 They can only observe and say “Amen”

ا�'مين

Author's Note

This was a collaboration between me and yas ( Soulcrusader) ..
hope you like this :)

Enjoy !!!

Reviews

[M.Babu]

"The scents of the cool spring breeze fill their senses
And as they feel that their dreams are getting closer
They sit between the trees whilst the goldfish are singing
Listening to them and holding their secrets
They let go and share a kiss that lingers on in perpetuity"

Such a sweet piece. And i think it was perfectly executed between the two of you...the tone and emotion are raw and so touching. GOOD JOB!

~M.Babu~

[Shep]

LOTT. Wondering the meaning of the word. So wise yet leaving me powerless. Loved it. Loved it.

[Raven Starhawk]

A lover's dream is generated from a gentle and loving soul. This was exquisite.

[Hotwater]

Pretty dreamy, such a gentle flow, showing the love of one another and in the beautiful side of nature. Congratulations to both writers.
*bird*

[Fontane Wong]

What an utter amazing and beautiful piece! Really well written of you both. Enjoyed so much. XD

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Lovely and beautifully written!! Really enjoyed it! :0 ))

[Science girl]

Awww I liked it very much! Great job you guys :)

[WritersSoul]

This is amazing :) i really enjoyed reading the second paragraph, made me smile :) You make a poem come to life and THATS talent! well done and credit to Soulcrusader :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

The collaboration was done so well!

[Becky C Strukamp]

I love the font and structure of this poem. And the poem, itself, its wonderful. Great work Stars are far and Soulcrusader!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Beautiful work! Both of you did an amazing job with it. =D Love this. So much hope of love. the happiness it brings... the stunning joy.. =D
Great write!