Lovers dream

Lovers dream

A Poem by stars are far

Looking towards the lush meadows

Two young lovers with their hungry eyes

Hug each other ever so tightly

And they never ever want to let go ….

 

On the shore they walk hand in hand

Their bodies sashaying in the golden sands

They feel this is what true love is all about

And as their hearts beat as one

They have no doubts…..

 

The scents of the cool spring breeze fill their senses

And as they feel that their dreams are getting closer

They sit between the trees whilst the goldfish are singing

Listening to them and holding their secrets

They let go and share a kiss that lingers on in perpetuity 

 

Then they look lovingly towards the hypnotic skies

And as they hold their hands out in prayer

Their dreams rain upon them from heaven

Made true by God’s everlasting love

 They can only observe and say “Amen”

ا�'مين

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
This was a collaboration between me and yas ( Soulcrusader) ..
hope you like this :)

Enjoy !!!

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"The scents of the cool spring breeze fill their senses
And as they feel that their dreams are getting closer
They sit between the trees whilst the goldfish are singing
Listening to them and holding their secrets
They let go and share a kiss that lingers on in perpetuity"

Such a sweet piece. And i think it was perfectly executed between the two of you...the tone and emotion are raw and so touching. GOOD JOB!

~M.Babu~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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WOW!!!!!



Posted 13 Years Ago


this just a beautiful piece of write

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was a really intriguing poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is awesome cute and sweet a great writing from great writers amaizng !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


You mean Yas wrote something without using the word, 'girl'?! *teasing*
This is a fantastic write. ^^ Thanks for sharing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice creation of the nature and situation of the lovers dreams and desires For the Era`s they were enjoying in these landscapes nicely composed symphony,

Posted 13 Years Ago


omg this is sooooo good! i loved it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"The scents of the cool spring breeze fill their senses
And as they feel that their dreams are getting closer
They sit between the trees whilst the goldfish are singing
Listening to them and holding their secrets
They let go and share a kiss that lingers on in perpetuity"

Such a sweet piece. And i think it was perfectly executed between the two of you...the tone and emotion are raw and so touching. GOOD JOB!

~M.Babu~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gentle flow with such love in the message,loved it!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the last stanza, really nice ending and write... nice structure how you wrote this and the colors... really great write, i enjoyed this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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