Our anniversary

Our anniversary

 

 

One year before

You were there

Holding my letter

And taking a deep breath

To read that

And cry over my goodbye ..

 

You left me why ??

I’m so lonely without you

Can you tell me why ?

Why do you hate me ?

Can you answer what ?

What I have done to you ?

Can you say where ?

Where I make a mistake ?

Can you reveal who ?

Who stole you from me ?

 

I hope for you

The best day ever ..

 

If you would come today

To see our 7^th anniversary

You will see the candles blowing for you

You will see the chocolate cake written on it :

“ I love you my dear boy “…

 

If you come today

You will see the balloons flying all over that room

Written on them :

“ I miss you “..

 

If you come today

You will find the best letters written for you

7 years of love

7 years of patience

7 years of dying

7 years of saying I love you ..

 

Surprise me by a smile

Or a love letter that cover all the goodbye’s

Tell me you love me today

And tomorrow

You can go away …

But please one day

Which is today

Let me remember our love

And hold me tight for one day

I love you my boy

If you come

I will give you my heart

and you will just find

your name, your picture

itched in it

I love you…

 

11:49 am

5/9/2011

Written for :

12/9/2011

Suhad 

Author's Note

Today is our anniversary like 7 years before i loved him ..
i hope he felt the same way but the last year was the year in the hill so believe me that i really loved you but i think that i will try my best to move on my ~s~ and be sure that you are the best memory in my heart i love you ...
hope you feel me and come back ...
tc welll

hope you enjoy
please i want honest opinions in that :)

Reviews

[Thea]

Oh, dear, this breaks my heart whenever I remember the whole story...Cheer up, I wish you can move on easily though I know it's tough...Just...Just try your best... :)))

Very lovely poem...I hope he reads this and once again remember how important he is in your life... :)))
Well done, Suhad...

[Sleepless]

nooo !! grr this story cant end like this i hope he comes back too ! *crossing my fingers *:)

[Yina]

Wow. must have broken your heart to see him walk out:(

[Tai Ryens]

Lovely poem, heartfelt, and I hope that he knows how you feel about him. Well Done! :)

[Dark Beauty]

Heart breaking but an awesome write,you can get through this and keep the memory,best wishes to you!! Great writing

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Such a heartfelt read full of emotion. Nicely done

[Dove]

Such a heartfelt poem.

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very tender, heartfelt, and sad poem of a love.

[Chiara]

So sad. Some parts of it, I felt were a little clunky, for example:

"But please one day
Which is today"

But apart from that, it was very moving.

[Sweets]

Great poem...
well, I won't say I hope he comes back, I'll say I hope you get the best best best guy on earth, who's 100000x better than him (:
I'm sure you'll find someone, but you gotta wait, AND SMILE D=
so yea =3
-hugs-