why you are called my friend ??

why you are called my friend ??

A Poem by stars are far

Why you are called my best  friend ???

 

When you feel down

I’m her to push you up “

“When you are cold

I will warm you “

 

This things are your best friend

But what if he was the one

That make you feel down

Or make you feel cold ??

 

Those things are what true friends

Protect you from ..

And avoid you being like this ..


This is what my friend did to me

But my sister

You are more than that friend

You are everything that I want in my life

 

You are so far

But you are close to my mind

And you are my heart

I love you my best friend Sister

 

3/9/2011

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
I wrote this because I felt like I’m loosing my best friend and I wanted to dedicate to my sis ( BFF) , and I want to say this is the biggest reason that I don’t want you to be my best friend I want you to be more than this, I really miss you my sis <3 <3

Hope you like this 
And please if there is any mistakes just tell me ok …I will be thankful for this  enjoy !!

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A lovely tribute to your sis. It's wonderful that you consider her your best friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so beautiful and you are so kind for writing this. You two are lucky to have such an awesome and strong connecttion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful and heartfelt! It sounds like you have an awesome sister! In the end family is always there for you! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a very beautiful poem...Sweet... :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


i hope u and ur sister remain....ur lucky to have such connection...i ve tryed with my sibling but our bond is weak....best of luck.
A ministering angel shall my sister be.
-- William Shakespeare (even though i dislike shakespeare's work, i thought this quote suitable for u....a guess his work does have sumthing for someone afterall )


Posted 13 Years Ago


OH in the 2nd line i think her is supposed to be here!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awww i got all weepy,thinking of my sis when we have fought and not spoken, I love this and she will too great and wonderful poem-Truly Is!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


T__T you would never lose that sister of yourz nooboid D:
-hugs- (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So very nice this is and I know who this is for and it is so beautiful and loving too, she'll love this immensly. Beautiful :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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