why you are called my friend ??

Why you are called my best  friend ???

 

When you feel down

I’m her to push you up “

“When you are cold

I will warm you “

 

This things are your best friend

But what if he was the one

That make you feel down

Or make you feel cold ??

 

Those things are what true friends

Protect you from ..

And avoid you being like this ..

This is what my friend did to me

But my sister

You are more than that friend

You are everything that I want in my life

 

You are so far

But you are close to my mind

And you are my heart

I love you my best friend Sister

 

3/9/2011

Author's Note

I wrote this because I felt like I’m loosing my best friend and I wanted to dedicate to my sis ( BFF) , and I want to say this is the biggest reason that I don’t want you to be my best friend I want you to be more than this, I really miss you my sis <3 <3

Hope you like this 
And please if there is any mistakes just tell me ok …I will be thankful for this  enjoy !!

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good..

[Sleepless]

no misatkes love this ill bet she will love this !:)

[- - -]

I love it :) I know people usually want more than that lol but idrk what else to say it's amazing and sweet

[Tai Ryens]

A very heartfelt tribute to your sister, Amazing, lovely. I do hope that the two of you will become closer, and that this finds a place in your sisters heart. Beautiful, great work! :)

[Fontane Wong]

A very heartfelt and warm tribute for your sister. Fabulously amazing. Your love for your sister is really great. A really beautiful piece.

[Sakib]

A great tribute to your sister. I'm really amazed to see your love for your sister. This is great. I hope it remains the same. Great work.

[EMF]

A beutiful love poem. The love of friends. Terriffic

[Lily Mae]

I hope this write finds a place in her heart and you both embrace the love between the two of you...xx

[ladyfoulkes]

your poem touch me in soo many ways.... and it made me think of my sissy

[Roxi L]

Aww a very heartfelt tribute to your sister.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~