NEVER WALK AWAY…BECAUSE I LOVE YOU

NEVER WALK AWAY…BECAUSE I LOVE YOU

 

If you can give me your heart forever

And make me join the lovely  atoms ..

 

And when try to wake up at night

But find myself prisoned between your arms….

 

Would you heal me if you were my last choose

And save me from falling apart .

 

Would you try to change my life

And let it taste the moon light once ..

 

When my heart’s name became yours

Would you please care about it and never throw away ..

 

Catch me and heal me up

Because you can know every heart beat that goes in me..

 

Try to fold my breathless lungs

And take my beatless heart

You should just know

That you are in my heart

Wherever you go

I really do love you so

Never walk away ….

Author's Note

Hope you like this

Reviews

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Try to fold my breathless lungs
And take my beatless heart
You should just know
That you are in my heart
Wherever you go
I really do love you so
Never walk away ….


I don't do this very much, adding lines in when I review,
But I just have to say I REALLY love these words,
I know these feelings so much. Amazing write!!!

[M.Babu]

"Try to fold my breathless lungs
And take my beatless heart
You should just know
That you are in my heart
Wherever you go
I really do love you so
Never walk away …."
Loved this part. :D
I always adore such a freeing write! You have opened your soul to leak at will into the tip of your pen. The emotiveness in this was very overwhelming and i felt the aches of the persona in every syllable - the mark of a talented write.

This was one of my best works from you, my friend...the quality was simply astounding! Please...keep em coming!

Great stuff!

~M.Babu~

[gogi7]

beautiful :)

[Dark Beauty]

Wonderful write, I loved it, Great job!! Keep writing!!

[Sakib]

It's so sad when it's hard to get close to the loved one. Nice poem. Wonderful write!!!

[Dove]

This is a wonderful poem, great job!

[Sleepless]

this is a wonderful poem !:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

This is one of my favorites of your poems. Maybe the best. Beautiful.

[Riki Tagle Alqmvist]

Not a fan of love poems, but this one makes me cry to be honest.

[Sweets]

This is awesome! D:
"Wherever you go
I really do love you so
Never walk away …."
Perfect lines and you ended it nicely :)
Great work!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

You have a stunning way with words and emotions of love that is most admirable... it is just another top write full of deep loving shown. Excellent :)