Please go... quickly

Please go …quickly

 

You can walk now

Because I’m sure

She can make you happy

I’m sure she will make you her king

And she will make the clouds your bed …

 

You can walk now

After I realized that she is great

I know that you are happy

With her but not me …

I’m assuring you

That I will always be fine

When your smile decorate  your face

I will be great

Just be ok …

 

You can walk now

Because she is better than me

In dealing with you

And make your smiles show

One after the other ..

 

Just walk now

Because it hurts

If it took time

And I’m afraid you

To see my tears

Falling … shinning …and  burning me ..

 

Just walk now

Because it is really hard

To think that you are

Going to other’s arms

Just be sure

That I will always love you

 

11:33 AM

5/9/2011

Suhad

I  want you to just go before my tears begin to flow

I really love you more than any day that went

I adore you 

Author's Note

Dedicated for my true love ~s~

you can walk away but please before you go just put your knife in my heart and when i bleed and my soul goes up be sure that i will be dead, and then walk away ..

hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

A very intense and emotional write.. well done..x

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WoW so very powerful, So much emotion.
This is very well written and expressed.

[EMF]

Very stunning and powerful. This may be one of the best I've read from your RR. Great

[Dark Beauty]

It really touched me and i could feel the pain in your words,great writing and nice job!!Total masterpiece i will agree!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Suhad, I just love the intensity you bring to this poem.... the words are amazingly put together creating a masterpice of unrequited love and the lengths you are metaphorically willing to go to, to ease the pain and hurt. Stunning :)