Please go... quickly

Please go …quickly

 

You can walk now

Because I’m sure

She can make you happy

I’m sure she will make you her king

And she will make the clouds your bed …

 

You can walk now

After I realized that she is great

I know that you are happy

With her but not me …

I’m assuring you

That I will always be fine

When your smile decorate  your face

I will be great

Just be ok …

 

You can walk now

Because she is better than me

In dealing with you

And make your smiles show

One after the other ..

 

Just walk now

Because it hurts

If it took time

And I’m afraid you

To see my tears

Falling … shinning …and  burning me ..

 

Just walk now

Because it is really hard

To think that you are

Going to other’s arms

Just be sure

That I will always love you

 

11:33 AM

5/9/2011

Suhad

I  want you to just go before my tears begin to flow

I really love you more than any day that went

I adore you 

Author's Note

Dedicated for my true love ~s~

you can walk away but please before you go just put your knife in my heart and when i bleed and my soul goes up be sure that i will be dead, and then walk away ..

hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Love will always hurt when lost but it us never the end only the chance for a new beginning with one that finds happiness to be wherever you are, take the knife out of your heart and stick it in his back as that's a better place for it. Powerful penning, keep em' coming

[Taffy]

I Started Crying It Was Amazing Lovely Written Awesome Words Emotional Was A Big Connection Your Saying The Choice Is Yours Your Feelings Were Written On To The Page And It Was Lovely Well Written Deep From Heart Amazing Poem And Your A Lovely Poet

[Layla Anne Massaro]

that is so emotional
but definitely
a well written piece

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Very heartfelt and emotional. Very well expressed. I agree with everyone else...it is definitly his loss! Hope you are alright?! ;)

[Becky C Strukamp]

very intense write.

[Desmund Tiny]

I agree with thrinna, It's not your loss.......
this poem is nicely done. I adore this I can relate And I adore this...thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

[Judas Hammer]

beautiful

[Thea]

It's not your loss, it's his... :)))
A very moving and amazing piece...Love it... :)))

[Sleepless]

no the love story broke apart !!! this is so tragic ! yep hope ~s~ understnds what he lost !:/ amazing poem !:)