I don't know why !!

I was sure I will cry

But I don’t know why

I was believing in this lie

And fall all over that guy ..

Author's Note

My tears flow down when i read your message
and i was sure of that ..

real emotions , a bad feeling

Enjoy

Reviews

[Que]

I love it.
I just think that at the end, the verb tense change makes the poem a little odd. Maybe you could change it into 'fell' instead of 'fall' (seeing as it's all in a past tense).
But then again, it's your poem.
Cheers and have a good day.

[Enigma]

Brilliant. The pain is clearly expressed in the four lines. Simple and frank. Well penned.

P.S. - Stay strong. I hope you feel better soon. :)

[Thea]

Ugh, you make me wanna remember that hurtful feeling...
Cheer up, Suhad...I know how hard it is for you...

This is a short but excellent writing... :)))

[Desmund Tiny]

I've been there before..... until now I guess... heheheh... this poem is great. It is short and sad but very meaningful....
I adore this, thanks for sharing this wonderful poem

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

I never been there before,but I was there after I read your poem.

[Dove]

I've been there before... Great poem and it has a lot of meaning.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Been there so many times and absolutely real.

[Sweets]

This is great!
so sad, short, and full of meaning..
I hope you have wonderful days from now on (:

[Roxi L]

I hate it when boys lie!!!!!!!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

[Sleepless]

well yeah i hate when boys lie i will cry too nice write !:)