My sweet friend

Can you make me count the stars

And you would be the moon ?

 

Can I feel down when you are beside

And you make my smile last forever ?

 

You are the one that delete my night meres

And make that monster become a sweet bird

 

You make the dreams true

And the life real

 

When I’m beside you

I feel that I’m satisfied

And I need not more than the oxygen

 

I love you my sweets friend

Just believe me  I miss you  …

 

3/9/2011

Author's Note

i wrote this for my friend - Sweets-
i miss you ;)
hope you like this :)
i love you :D

enjoy

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Nice words..!!!

[gogi7]

"You make the dreams true
And the life real"
love that line really good :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A beautiful loving poem where warmth oozes through and can feel the true friendship...its strength and power. An excellent dedication :)

[Roxi L]

Beautiful.

Writiing keeps the dream alive
~V~

[EMF]

Truly beautiful. Nothing else to it.

[Sunni Davis]

Beautiful! I think everyone should have a friend like this. Well written.

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ah this is so hopeful and so wonderful.
Very nicely expressed and written.