My sweet friend

Can you make me count the stars

And you would be the moon ?

 

Can I feel down when you are beside

And you make my smile last forever ?

 

You are the one that delete my night meres

And make that monster become a sweet bird

 

You make the dreams true

And the life real

 

When I’m beside you

I feel that I’m satisfied

And I need not more than the oxygen

 

I love you my sweets friend

Just believe me  I miss you  …

 

3/9/2011

Author's Note

i wrote this for my friend - Sweets-
i miss you ;)
hope you like this :)
i love you :D

enjoy

Reviews

[Carrion.]

love this.c:

[Becky C Strukamp]

very sweet.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, so sweet. A really nice tribute! Great write!

[Thea]

A really sweet tribute... :)))

[Que]

Nice poem.
Just one thing: it's nightmares, not night meres.
I agree with another commenter, it might need a bit of editing.
Either way, I really liked it, and I'm positive your friend will too :D
Cheers and have a good day.

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Nice poem...

[Dove]

This is amazing!! its so beautiful and she will like it!

[Sweets]

This is greattttttttt (:
so so so so sweet :)
I missed you wayyy more and imma see you after 105 daysss :D
Can't wait, I love you sis

[Sleepless]

aaaw!!!:) this is really beautiful i am sure even though i dont know her she will like it !:)

[Black]

nice poem,