My way back home

My way back home

A Poem by stars are far

My way back home

 

I know I’m crazy

I know it is wrong

But I will beg

Lovers walkers

Just tell me

How to forget ?

Tell me

How to walk away

With no tears ?

Help me

To find the way

To go away

From this maze

That I’ve been thrown in it

From the first day on my life

The maze of your heart

That I can’t find a way out of it ..

 

I don’t want to be a loser

I don’t want to feel down

I don’t want to be crazy anymore

I just want to find my way back home !!

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
Also dedicated for ~s~..

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enjoy as much as you can :)

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On Crete, in the early days of the Helenistic experience, there was mention of a labyrinth. I think its a play around the word ' baby's mind ' in just the way that I've used the word ' Muladior.' It likes to hear something tender in your complaints. Babies are that way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very lovely write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0.0 what happened ? the poem is nice and amazing !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


On Crete, in the early days of the Helenistic experience, there was mention of a labyrinth. I think its a play around the word ' baby's mind ' in just the way that I've used the word ' Muladior.' It likes to hear something tender in your complaints. Babies are that way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Here you go haha again another fantastic poem. You have unlimited potential

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Love the last stanza, Such a powerful & emotional read, It's beuatiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


As usual, an adorable piece of poetry. I like the picture of getting lost in the maze of the heart of your loevd one. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


"S" Is obviously a lucky guy!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Another fine dedication to ~s~!!!
I wish he'll be able to appreciate all of these someday...
Good to read it... :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good old mr.S... what a message and in this poem and I'm sure you will find love and 'your way back home'. You are too good a person not to in my opinion.... great poem as always...sooo wonderful to read :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Another poem with the strength shining through, but behind a plantive cry. Great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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