I can't hate you

I can't hate you

A Poem by stars are far

When that day came again

I was holding my pen to draw the rain

I was hiding behind the meadows

To not see those great tears

I would dagger the knife in my heart

And move toward the skies barefoot

I won’t say that I regret that one day

But I will try my best

To keep your smile as my lense

To see you everyday and night

I can’t stay away

Please trust me love

I can’t paint the sky

When you are not beside

I love you  

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
dedicated for my ~s~
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A beautiful poem:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a sweet poem...
The words were harnessed with the love of the persona and that really pushed the message better accoriding to me :D

Well written

~M.Babu~

Posted 13 Years Ago


a nice poem
great written

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very emotional. I could sense sadness and longing. Am I wrong? Beautiful, nonetheless. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


who's the lucky ~s~? It's so sweet. I adore this poem......

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely poem... :)))
Again, that lucky ~s~ seems to inspire you always...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fantastic write! Love it!! Very well written! =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


A candle in the wind, burning brightly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Quite an exceptional poem... you have massive talent.
*bird*

Posted 13 Years Ago


sweet !!:) hope he apprecaites it 1:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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