I promise

I promise that I will sell  my soul 

For a breath you could take ..

I promise when you get old

And your hair is white 

Then I will love you more than I do …

I promise if you get sick 

I will make the beats of my heart

Be your medicine 

And I will be dedicated for you …

I promise that I will keep my promises 

Even if you hate me 

I will love you forever 

And I will make you the happiest person ever ...

Author's Note

Hope you like that
i wrote this 2 days ago :D

Reviews

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most enjoyable read.

[Jeremy Baker]

Another very sweet poem.

[Garfield Rupe]

This is a very beautiful Poem. It tells so clearly the love of one Spouse for the other. There is love all throughout this poem. The kind of love that comes from a very loving heart

I promise if you get sick
I will make the beats of my heart be your medicine
and I will be dedicated for you. So very beautifull

[Hotwater]

Nice.

[Linda]

ooh pls message me who you love??? so much love and dedication xoxoxox

[Enigma]

I definitely liked that. This piece stands apart because of its simplicity and the sheer beauty of the feeling it conveys. Its adorable, if I can add. Keep writing. You're a talented poet. :)

[Sweets]

I love this!
So sweet and honest :)
Wonderful work!

[Lily Mae]

I love your promises...I hope that they all stay true:) xx

[watch_the_world]

Aweh this is so adorable.

[Jane Doe]

Lol I meant sold
:/stupid auto correct