The way

Look.. Smile.. wink

                       Say sweet words

Speak the following words :

           “ I love you “

You will hear back :

        “ I love you too”

Marry ..

  Have kids

And now you can die restly ..

Having all your dreams  come true

And Owning your love/wife/husband

By a look …

Author's Note

Dedicated for my true dream..love ~s~

Hoe you all like this and if he read this i hope you love this ...
and enjoy reading this :)

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

Very sweet

[Linda]

Awwwee, any response from ~s~ so far, tell us pls xxoxo♥♥♥♥♥

[EMF]

Sorry Suhad, same old problem with my eye's.

[Sleepless]

aaaaw!! thsi is really sweet !:) i love it !:)

[Hotwater]

A 'colourful' write.
*bird*

[Enigma]

I liked it. Its its simple beautiful way, it compressed the meaning of a life lived full sharing it with a young one. Nice font and use of colours as well. I love the last two lines. :D

[Thea]

Go, Suhad! You can definitely fight for it!
True love is just THIS! THIS piece! :)))

[Roxi L]

I like the font and colour...but you could design it to a certin gender, 'cause the slashes always get me confused

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

[Dove]

i love the different colors and over all this is just a realy good poem