Just dream again

 

I won’t give up

For taking your heart

I won’t say I’m done

till i get you back again

 

I will just keep trying

till my heart says stop

And my tears are bored

And my veins say that’s enough

 

I won’t move away

Till your heart begs on it's own knees

I will try to hit the stars

And smile at the skies

and send you

the best hi's ...

 

Follow me to the grave

and rip me beside your cage

I won’t give up my dreams

till the last heartbeat ..

 

I will stay alive and say

i love you for the last day

And when my soul raises

i will just send to you

the best words of love

My great love

Author's Note

Dedicated for my true love ~s~

I know it is not that great and you won't like it but please try to enjoy and give me an honest reviews :)

Thank you all

Reviews

[Thea]

"I won’t give up my dreams
till the last heartbeat .."

Another heartfelt poem for ~s~, haha! :)))
I understand you...Keep on writing...And just express how you feel...
Love this poem! :)))

[EMF]

What I could read was terrific. Just damn the cataracts. Terrific work Lady.

[Jeremy Baker]

I like it, and I'm sure your true love will lke it immensely too!

[Dove]

very nice and beautiful poem, great job:)

[Dayran]

The fruit has as much a need to give as the roots have to receive. An strong intimation of a situation, ' when the stars all fade away. ' You are perfectly right in saying, one should dream again.

[Sweets]

This is awesome! I loved the message in this poem! Very lovely and powerful :)
but I found some grammatical mistakes, so yea, i just hope you edit those:
Fourth line: it's till I GET you back again
Sixth line: till my heart SAYS stop
Eighth line: And my veins SAY that's enough
Tenth line: till your heart BEGS, and I think it's better if you wrote it as this: till your heart begs on it's own knees.
so yea, :) This poem is truly truly wonderful! and I'm glad you have a hope sis :)
Keep on writing and you'll hopefully do reach the stars!
i'll see you on december XDD

[Jeff]

Very nice write!

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is a very honest piece of writing.
I felt the same way a few months ago.
If he comes back, he was yours from the very get go, if not; forget about him.
Very well done.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Becky C Strukamp]

It shines of love for another.

Nice write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Well atleast for me I lke it loads, it has the love that is very romantic and so lovely too, and everyone here is like getting so jealous of ~s~, has a world record in dedicated love poems lol.

Excellent as always my friend :)