Just dream again

 

I won’t give up

For taking your heart

I won’t say I’m done

till i get you back again

 

I will just keep trying

till my heart says stop

And my tears are bored

And my veins say that’s enough

 

I won’t move away

Till your heart begs on it's own knees

I will try to hit the stars

And smile at the skies

and send you

the best hi's ...

 

Follow me to the grave

and rip me beside your cage

I won’t give up my dreams

till the last heartbeat ..

 

I will stay alive and say

i love you for the last day

And when my soul raises

i will just send to you

the best words of love

My great love

Author's Note

Dedicated for my true love ~s~

I know it is not that great and you won't like it but please try to enjoy and give me an honest reviews :)

Thank you all

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

That was so romantic and sweet! It was so heart warming too! The emotion is so full and catch the image just well. I especially love the last stanza, actually, I love the whole poem. It was just awwwwwesome!! :D

[Hotwater]

Nice.
*bird*

[sugar]

it is great and i did like it =P

[Que]

I really liked this poem, it's sweet. :)
I just think that maybe the ending is a little off - the last two lines.
Considering you were going along with somewhat of a rhyme scheme etc, the fact that the last two verses end in 'love' sort of ruins the musicality that the poem has.
Though it's probably just me :)
Cheers and have a good day.

[Linda]

Awwee sooo romanticly written, awesome xxxx

[Enigma]

Err, why will we not like it? Haha. Don't be so cross with your writings. It was a good read. You put down the sheer persistence of love in words. And I certainly like it. :)

[Dove]

i really like this its great, good job

[Sleepless]

aaaw! this is amazing love it 1:)

[Hush Hush]

Really emotional and heart warming poem, well done ^ ^