Try once

Can you find out why ..

I’m in love with your eye

 

Can you make me saved

From the agony that is following me everyday

 

Can you kill those evil dreams

And make the flowers come back again

 

Can you try once for me

To make the seeds grow in my heart

A plant and flowers that dance with the breeze

And the only laugh i hear is yours ..

 

Can you try to make me alive

And make the goodbye go by

and the water of the river move back again

And the sun sets smiling ...

 

Can you try once for me

Try to hold my tears and throw them in the sea..

 

Can you try

Please

I’m here begging you my love

just try once

For me

To make me alive again

 

I love you

Author's Note

Dedicated for ~s~ ( i adore you )

Hop you like this :)
please i want honest reviews
enjoy :)

Reviews

[Andrea Vargas]

It just took my breathy away! i love it(:

[LochnezzMonster]

I really liked this, made me smile :DD. love the descriptions, love the creativity and the hints of nature. This story almost sounds like a white knight coming in and making everything alright. And it's good to believe in fairytales every once in a while, right??

[Yina]

I wonder why poeple fall in love with eyes... I get told so very often that my eyes are beautiful an I still don't see how they're any better then anyone elses...
Anyway, this was really beautiful:)

[Thea]

YIeeeeee!!! Lovely but at some points it looks sad...Great poem... :)))

[Sweets]

So romantic and great!
I truly love this!

So very romantic. Really nice. Love it.

[Dayran]

The moving hand writes and having writ moves on.......Omar Khayyam. That is also life, the best kind, because it keeps moving on.

[sugar]

aww how romantic! this was so powerful and sweet

[Sleeping Maiden]

AHHH...I absolutely LOVE IT!!! =D So passionate... so honest... gosh, it is such a wonderful piece!! Fantastic write!! ^o^

[Sleepless]

sweet and romantic love the poem !:)