Your answer

Your answer

A Poem by stars are far

once I asked your eyes

Why they are living ??

No answer was reviled

But I didn’t know why ..

 

Many years passed

And you didn’t answer

But one day

I was walking alone

With the moon and the stars

I saw you there

Walking with her

I was speechless

I was dying inside …

 

You didn’t care about me

And walked in your way

And I knew the answer for my question

Wasn’t what I expected

“It was you living for her “…

 

But I will still adore you 

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
Dedicated for you ~s~ ..

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Sad and joy together, makes another special feeling. The was absoulutely fresh and beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow. nicely written. I love it. Its so sad!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv it it realy rocks i do the same thing for people like this guy -g-

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sadness and joy together

Posted 13 Years Ago


love it love it. sad but i love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this poem! The picture held one hawty I adore from T.V and I ain't talking bout the girl.... hehe. Wording is fab, sad but lovely. Amazing write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love the picture,
and i like the poem
though it is very sad :(

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw that is so sad:( I'm sure there are many poeple that can relate to this...
Beautifully written:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautifully penned. Loved it. Loved the structure and colors.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is absolutely wonderful! :)
Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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