I'm missing you my love

I'm missing you my love

A Poem by stars are far

It was long time ago

When I really began to miss

Your smile and our sweet kiss..

 

I couldn’t hold my tears from flow

I just loved you and I can’t go

Without you my love

 

I would be dying

I could be cruel

But I can’t live without being with you ..

 

I miss you more than you could ever though

I love you more than you could ever be loved

I will always say that

“I’m living just to love you more

everyday than the past one “

 

I adore you 

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
Hope you like this
dedicated for my ~s~ ...

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Very well done, sweet words and such a nice write.
Keep up the good work.

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's cute...that much is true....
but to be quite honest, I didn't like it.
It's rushed, and extremely cut-off.
You don't seem to really have a subject, other than missing someone...which is dreadfully uncommon.
I've seen the things you write, and I know that you can do better...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Such a cute and colourful write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Amazing work! I really loved the color in the words too! Sets the mood to the poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love this! Fab wording. Great write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great work!
:) I can relate to this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely..!!!!!

Sweet words engraving a sweet layer of sweet person..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nicely done.. :) x

Posted 13 Years Ago


Looks like someone is really in love here!!! Hahaha! Very...Very...Colorful! XD
Sweet writing...~s~ should read this... :))) Just kidding...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice.
*bird*


Posted 13 Years Ago



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